Wednesday 10 November 2010

The Handmaid's Tale

A letter from a Commander's wife to Serena Joy: An invitation to a 'Birth Day'

RE: An invitation to a 'Birth Day'

Dear Serena Joy

I would like to invite you to a Birth Day we will be having, as one of the Handmaid's is due to have a baby after nine long months. A blue Birthmobile will come and bring you to the Centre where the birth of the baby will take place. I am so greateful that one of our Handmaid's pregnant because it is a miracle to bring life to a child for the future. I will be looking forward to seeing you there.

Yours Sincerely
Commander's wife
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4 comments:

  1. Henna.Paresh.Chandarana11 November 2010 at 06:04

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  2. Henna.Paresh.Chandarana11 November 2010 at 06:05

    WWW: good detail

    EBI: longer maybe?
    :-)

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  3. rosiehannah11 November 2010 at 06:07

    WWW - Good use of description
    EBI - Specified names, not just "Commanders Wife"

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  4. Chervaughn A2 ELLA11 November 2010 at 06:07

    w-good invitation in terms of layout and description of book
    e-made it more about the wife instead of mentioning the handmaid because its important to the wife

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